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放手吧，爱

[color=Blue][size=5]放手吧，爱[/size][/color]

[size=5][font=宋体]如血的天晚风轻袭
很多人喜欢这时的空气
爱的生活让我着迷
而逝去往往是那么不经意


爱，融进了多少甜言蜜语
一直看得到我曼妙的步履
你曾经给予我的期许
很容易将我凌空高举


爱，如绽放的玫瑰花
你说会永远当我是朵奇葩
你告诉我不要害怕
绝不会轻易将彼此抛下


如血的天晚风轻抚
我想起了牵手的当初
认真去打算未来的路
把一切当做了赌注


生活的平淡会将激情磨掉
当然，这我早已料到
以后的生活我也会时常笑
却想不出它还会有什么索要


平淡多于激情的牵绊
那一天你彻底将我背叛
我的心思还留有甘甜
生活的凄苦就开始纠缠


一直都是那么相信爱
从没想到会爱的这样失败
却没有勇气和你说出拜拜
你这爱情的无赖


想不再忠诚于这世间的爱
也想尽快忘记你的变坏
更想把你毫无保留的掩埋
可我怕明天都不会再来


将我凌空高举的人啊
是你告诉我不要害怕
是你说不会轻易彼此抛下
难道你想就这样作罢...


如血的天晚风轻袭
选择融进让我喜欢的空气
比肩的高楼那样熟悉
眼睛微闭我真的凌空而起


一直都是那么相信爱
从没想到会爱的这样失败
还是鼓起勇气和你说拜拜
多情地说：放手吧，爱


如血的天晚风轻抚
我又想起了牵手的当初
不再去打算未来的路
却错把生命当做了赌注...[/font][/size]

     [color=Magenta]多情的人啊，放手吧，爱。为何要做出这样的选择，为什么不能将自己救赎。真是觉得可惜...如果你我是那样熟悉，我一定会尽力将你挽留。真是觉得可惜...希望来生能幸福。[/color]

[[i] 本帖最后由 Gunyou 于 2011-5-21 13:59 编辑 [/i]]

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从开始就预言这是个结束.
艺术派的暗示,充满全部.
不知道楼主是不是故意的,留下一些漏洞来表达.
较完美,但有可进一步修改的地方.
红心二给了!
观后感言:
人的悲哀,最智慧的而被圈养的生物.
除了爱,只有恨,不如只有麻木.
如果苍天也会哭,那么一切都是浮云的错误,聚散都不由自主.

我没有如此复杂坎坷的爱，却很喜欢如此复杂坎坷爱情的诗。楼主的诗都是用心、用情感写的，因此严谨、工整和大气，留给读者更多的品味。送一红心。

嗯，各位的评论都是那样切骨。我在这里能感受到被人读懂的喜悦，这也是我喜欢在这里发表的重要原因。

爱情一旦和油盐酱醋结合,就变成了生活.
生活难免会有磕磕绊绊,每一次摩擦都会造成一次矛盾,同样也会磨掉一些彼此的棱角.
这是我的爱情观,两个人的爱情在生活中摩擦,在生活中历练,在生活中融和.
多一些理解和宽容.别用愤怒的眼光看着你曾深爱过的人,
找到属于你们自己的爱情信物.牢牢握住它.你会幸福的.

有时候放手也是一种爱，虽然当时很无奈，我也有过这样无奈的事情

你的期待 我的壮志 终究抵不过心的变化 愿你摆脱现在的困境

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[quote]原帖由 [i]won8484[/i] 于 2011-5-21 15:35 发表 [url=http://67.220.93.4/forum/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=71708206&ptid=3855516][img]http://67.220.93.4/forum/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
很多年前，不懂爱情，爱情却始终陪伴。
很多年后，懂了爱情，却再也找不到爱情了。 [/quote]

[size=5][font=楷体_GB2312][color=Navy]深感楼主心中之伤情，不过人心是需要学习和历练的，愿楼主早登彼岸！

楼上之言深入我心，鼓掌！

爱，来时，无声无息；
爱，去时，我心依依！[/color][/font][/size]

悲伤

爱，太复杂，刚刚失恋！都不知道算不算失恋，但是却和她有爱抚，只是想好好的保护她，不想过早发生性行为，还是被她抛弃了！真想骂她个狗血喷头，但是爱过她却无法开口，只好自己承受，楼主说的举上天空又抛下来，算是体会了，心痛就算了，胃足足痛到现在，都一个多月了，也没回复到原来的食量！

她说：我感觉不到你的爱，
我说：我把爱藏在心头，默默的爱。
结果，她要去寻找爱。
我之过？

回复 11楼 的帖子

嗯，文学的种种夸张描述，当于自身显现时便觉得那不仅仅是一种夸张，而是一种切实的体会。我的创作之源是取自我身边的一位女老师的逝去，真是觉得很可惜。繁复的生活中我们都该珍重才是。

爱之切情更深，爱之一字贯彻一生，有大爱有小家，人生在世，草木一秋，该放手时就放手，因为输不起啊。

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深情的文字
读完全篇 内心隐隐若怅里

是啊 爱是给予和付出
但不等于是等式
即使付出真心和全部 但时常却又是给人无限落魄伤怀
因为 懂爱、知爱、善爱之人难寻 所谓孤掌难鸣
爱是双方的同等认知和付出
没有共鸣 亦只将落魄无声心生憾年~

感谢 ‘滚油’书写如此美文心声
保存了 再与红心！